Persuasive Writing-Why families should spend more time together

Imagine being home alone all day when you could spend time with siblings or your family members? I strongly believe that as a child, it is really important to spend time with your loved ones and have a really great time with them. You will then have a fuller heart after spending time with them because they support you and your feelings even when you don’t ask them to, they also stick up for you when you are getting hurt or bullied.

Did you know that you need to build a good, healthy relationship with members in your family? I personally believe that this is important because spending time with your kids teaches them how to be great parents ( when they are older). This means they will want to share their life and have fun with each other when the kids are older. 

I think that families should spend more time together because they need to learn to communicate with each other. When your spending time together you could give your family a lot of motivation for their life ahead. They could also help you with any struggles that you have or had in your life. This is because the kids will then feel way more secure and feel like it is ok to talk to their parents about anything.

Have you ever noticed that spending time with your family develops positive behaviours? A fact is that your kids at school could have a chance that they might get mad or talking negatively about other children. I believe that having a positive behaviour could boost your advantages of getting any leadership or boss roles in school or work. Families tend to have a really good time together, make really cool jokes together and saying things nice about each other,  so your family members will fill others buckets and make them feel way happier so they won’t lash out at anyone.

I strongly advise you that you and your family should spend more time together, so they could learn how to communicate with each other. This is important because spending time together could give your family a lot of motivation for their life ahead. They could also help you with any struggles that you have or had in your life. This is because the kids will then feel way more secure and feel like it is ok to talk to their parents about anything.  Now stop!!! How many have you had a day out or hung with your family members?

For term 3, Davos Literacy group has been learning all about Persuasive Writing. First, we looked at adverts and how they are Persuasive, then we looked at pieces of writing that were already written and highlight the persuasive words in the writing piece. After that, we got to choose what Persuasive writing we would like to write about. I chose to write about why families should spend more time together. If you have anything to explain or help me with please leave me a comment then I will answer it. Hope you enjoy.